The feedback I received on my last pitch suggested I add some enthusiasm and spirit to my delivery, and as such, I tried my best to add that in this rendition of my elevator pitch. I can say with confidence that my pitch is far easier to recite now on this third attempt. I'm far more comfortable in front of the camera and the overall quality of delivery has increased.
I think you did a great job. You seemed really comfortable in front of the camera, kept eye contact, and used hand motions rather than just leaving at your sides. It gets a lot easier to feel comfortable by the third try at this. These things are what really help sell your pitch to your audience, and show that you believe in what you are selling.
I like the name of your service. You seem very comfortable with giving your pitch, and it seems memorized. You also seemed to fit in the information you wanted to share in very little time. It definitely takes a lot of work to feel comfortable in front of the camera. I definitely still need to get used to this; however, you seemed confident. Overall, this was a good pitch.
I also received similar feedback about the enthusiasm and spirit in my delivery. I think this is important because it makes the viewers of the pitch more interested in what you are talking about when you are very passionate about what you are talking about. I also thought it was easier to do the pitch the third time around as well because I am familiar with how to do it now and also tried to polish my pitch from the feedback I received before. I think this was a great pitch.
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job. You seemed really comfortable in front of the camera, kept eye contact, and used hand motions rather than just leaving at your sides. It gets a lot easier to feel comfortable by the third try at this. These things are what really help sell your pitch to your audience, and show that you believe in what you are selling.
ReplyDeleteI like the name of your service. You seem very comfortable with giving your pitch, and it seems memorized. You also seemed to fit in the information you wanted to share in very little time. It definitely takes a lot of work to feel comfortable in front of the camera. I definitely still need to get used to this; however, you seemed confident. Overall, this was a good pitch.
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ReplyDeleteHey Jake,
ReplyDeleteI also received similar feedback about the enthusiasm and spirit in my delivery. I think this is important because it makes the viewers of the pitch more interested in what you are talking about when you are very passionate about what you are talking about. I also thought it was easier to do the pitch the third time around as well because I am familiar with how to do it now and also tried to polish my pitch from the feedback I received before. I think this was a great pitch.