The feedback I received from my last pitch was crucial in helping me form this one. Something I feel was especially helpful was the advice to speak a bit slower and more calmly. I didn't find any of the feedback to be silly, in fact all of it was well warranted and appreciated too. In this second attempt at my pitch, I tried to use gestures more as well as be more calm in delivery.
Friday, October 26, 2018
Assignment 17--Elevator Pitch No.2
The feedback I received from my last pitch was crucial in helping me form this one. Something I feel was especially helpful was the advice to speak a bit slower and more calmly. I didn't find any of the feedback to be silly, in fact all of it was well warranted and appreciated too. In this second attempt at my pitch, I tried to use gestures more as well as be more calm in delivery.
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I thought you were really well spoken in this pitch, so slowing down and calming yourself seems like it definitely helped. You looked professional as well, standing and making eye contact with the camera the entire time you delivered your pitch. My only critique would be to show a little more emotion or passion rather than just reading your pitch to the audience. Other than that great job!
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